Hi! My name is Huckleberry Fin. I and my friend John Sawyer, Kim Hikes and Jim Berry are a band of thieves. We have a lot to steal and have plans too.
This is a secret, don't tell to anybody this secret. I'm now going to the Harbour City to steal. Our plan is we will wear our dirty old clothes then stand on a big high many people crowded stage. We will be saying that we are poor children no houses no good clothes and very weak. Then the people will [give us money]. We will be rich after the plan.
But when we [acted out] the plan, a detective caught us. We were fritened [frightened], then I said we should make a plan. We thunk [thought] and thought. Then we had a very good plan. We could put soem pig blood on the floor then make a trail of corn, so the people will [would] think somebody killed us and got the food.
Then we sailed a ship to Canada, there were two lovely and rich girls who lived there. Then we killed their cousins [and] pretended to be their cousins. Then we [would] go and steal their money. We made the plan. We go [went] away to Japan.
Then we stole a fossil from a dinosaur museum. Then we gave the fossil to another museum. Then they will [would] give us money. Then we [went] somewhere else called Greenland.
There is [was] so cold so we changed our clothes to winter clothes. Then we went to the library, book stores, Mei sum [Maxim's], restraunts [restaurants], hotels and streets to pickpocket everybody we think is rich.
Trouble seems always follows Huckleberry but he is smart and has other plans too. 22 February 2008
23 February 2008
Book Summary: The Man in the Moon
I always have a good think on walking home because in morning at home I am in a rush and mum is always bothering me to do this and that like feeding the dog, pack my bag, go to toilet, brush my teeth, wash my face and comb your [my] hair. I hate someone bothering me when I'm doing something. I hate to be in school too because the teacher is bothering me the same way.
In my walk home it is good to think of going to join the Harley Davison Gang. Everybody like it in my class. But one thing I don't like in the Harley Davison Gang is I need to eat ten gold fish, and dead chickens blood.
The next day I was joining the Harley Davison Gang they asked me to wait in a very lonely place and I wait when they ask me to come out. I come out and they say I should take a test. Then they said steal a pantha.
But when I put the statue pantha of Earl's down, it moved and attack the Harley Davison Gang's boys. Then they all ran away exept [except] me. I was so sleepy that I had slept [fallen asleep].
When I woke my face was covered with pantha saliva. Then Earl was in his yard finding his pantha. I had brung [brought] the pantha back to Earl. But this night the moon was not here. Then everything started dancing even things that cannot move [started to dance]. When they finish dancing they all are becoming statues again.
Then I asked Earl to tell me why would the statues move. He say he would sent [send] a post letter to me and a present the next day. I found the letter and the present. The present is a pyramit (pyramid) and a man with the moon. Then Earl poped [popped] out of my back. 15 February 2008
In my walk home it is good to think of going to join the Harley Davison Gang. Everybody like it in my class. But one thing I don't like in the Harley Davison Gang is I need to eat ten gold fish, and dead chickens blood.
The next day I was joining the Harley Davison Gang they asked me to wait in a very lonely place and I wait when they ask me to come out. I come out and they say I should take a test. Then they said steal a pantha.
But when I put the statue pantha of Earl's down, it moved and attack the Harley Davison Gang's boys. Then they all ran away exept [except] me. I was so sleepy that I had slept [fallen asleep].
When I woke my face was covered with pantha saliva. Then Earl was in his yard finding his pantha. I had brung [brought] the pantha back to Earl. But this night the moon was not here. Then everything started dancing even things that cannot move [started to dance]. When they finish dancing they all are becoming statues again.
Then I asked Earl to tell me why would the statues move. He say he would sent [send] a post letter to me and a present the next day. I found the letter and the present. The present is a pyramit (pyramid) and a man with the moon. Then Earl poped [popped] out of my back. 15 February 2008
14 February 2008
Book Summary: Oliver Twist
Oliver was a boy and an orphan. Her mother is dead (died) before (after) she gives birth. Before his mother died, his mother said she needed to send Oliver to a dish washing factory. The people in the dish washing factory are no good at Oliver and the others. They gave little food, little sleep and very much washing dish work. And one day Oliver is brave to ask for more food, Mr Bumble is angry. He sent him outside.
Now Oliver was happy he think he now was going on an adventure. He was heading to London. But when he is heading to London he met a stranger named Dodger. He asked Oliver to go to his home. In their home they teach him how to pickpocket. Then he and Dodger and Charlie had pickpocket a man called Mr Brownlow. Oliver did not do it, just Dodger and Charlie had done it. Oliver just stand there unbeleviblely (unbelieving what he saw). Then Mr Brownlow knew someone pickpocket him, he think it was... Oliver but he was wrong.
Then the people send him Oliver to the court house, the judge ask him many questions, like what is your name and other questions. At that time a woman had said it is not Oliver who pickpocket him. It is two naughty boys. Oliver struggled up and fell down.
When he woke up he was in a peacful (peaceful) room. He was in one of Mr Brownlow room. One day Mr Brownlow ask Oliver to sent a post. At the time he had walked Nancy had caught Oliver and gave Oliver to Bill.
Next day Bill asked Oliver to pickpocket a good man in a rich house. Oliver is quite bad in pickpocketing, he had broke (broken) a vase in the house. He didn't mean it, Oliver had fell (fallen) down to the ground.
When he woke he saw he's in a peaceful room like in the Brownlows. But it is not Mr Brownlow's room it's a family that he had broken the vase. The family was good to him. One day they asked him why would you steal and many other questions. He told (them) the whole story to the family. They said they will call the police. At last they live happily ever after. 10 February 2008
Now Oliver was happy he think he now was going on an adventure. He was heading to London. But when he is heading to London he met a stranger named Dodger. He asked Oliver to go to his home. In their home they teach him how to pickpocket. Then he and Dodger and Charlie had pickpocket a man called Mr Brownlow. Oliver did not do it, just Dodger and Charlie had done it. Oliver just stand there unbeleviblely (unbelieving what he saw). Then Mr Brownlow knew someone pickpocket him, he think it was... Oliver but he was wrong.
Then the people send him Oliver to the court house, the judge ask him many questions, like what is your name and other questions. At that time a woman had said it is not Oliver who pickpocket him. It is two naughty boys. Oliver struggled up and fell down.
When he woke up he was in a peacful (peaceful) room. He was in one of Mr Brownlow room. One day Mr Brownlow ask Oliver to sent a post. At the time he had walked Nancy had caught Oliver and gave Oliver to Bill.
Next day Bill asked Oliver to pickpocket a good man in a rich house. Oliver is quite bad in pickpocketing, he had broke (broken) a vase in the house. He didn't mean it, Oliver had fell (fallen) down to the ground.
When he woke he saw he's in a peaceful room like in the Brownlows. But it is not Mr Brownlow's room it's a family that he had broken the vase. The family was good to him. One day they asked him why would you steal and many other questions. He told (them) the whole story to the family. They said they will call the police. At last they live happily ever after. 10 February 2008
Diary: At the Zoo
This is the second day in the (Guangzhou) hotel. We went to a zoo, we had saw (seen) antelopes, deers, elephants, giraffes, rinos (rhinos), hippos, road runners, osthrichs (ostriches), buffaloes, zebras, ducks, white tigers, lions and monkeys. Then we had ate (eaten) french fries, hamburgers and vegetable. At last we had fed the giraffes and elephants. And the last thing we had done was seeing (watching) a white tiger show, it was awful (awesome), and had saw many more shows. Then we went back to the hotel. 3 February 2008
Diary: At the Circus
I, father, mother and sister went out to go to have a weekend holiday. We sail a ship to there, we went to a circus. Inside there was a fire windmill and inside the windmill where four men dangerously. A dog pretending to be a horse and a monky (monkey) pretending to be a human and everything they done (did) are facinating (fascinating), incredible and amazing! At last before we came back to the hotel we had played some litter water ponds. 2 February 2008
06 February 2008
Book Summary: Romeo & Juliet
Once apon(upon) a time, there’s a Capulet and Montague family, they hate each other. The Montague family has a son Romeo, and the Capulet family has a daughter Juliet. Romeo love Juliet. But Juliet’s mother and father want Juliet to marry another boy. But Juliet don’t like that boy, so before that day, she ask someone to have a poison that one day dead, and the other day alive. Then Romeo think Juliet died so he ask the doctor for poison that’s very strong, then he drank it and died. When Juliet woke up, she know that Romeo died, then she found a knife and she killed herself. Then someone knew they two had died, so that person had told the two fathers. Then the Capulets and the Montague family had been friends. 27 January 2008
Book Summary: Van Gough’s Potatoes
Vince (I) is a boy. Last week in August, I went to grandma’s home, my parents didn’t know that grandma’s home was fun. Then grandma changed my room to a dark and scarier room for me to sleep. I felt scared whth those scarey (scary) picture eye’s staring. One day, I felt brave for those scary eye’s staring but I’m just having a dream but the dream was real. There’s a boy and a girl who are sad and I say, ‘I will help you.’ Then I had came inside the paper or picture, I help them in the dream, then next morning, the picture that I had dreamed smile. 22 January 2008
Book Summary: Iguandon
No one knows why Iguandon’s bottom is so fat. It’s (Its) hand had claws and is a plant eater. Iguandon may new (knew) the first flowers in the world. Because it is in Cretaes Period. If a velicaraptor attacks, it uses it (its) spike to kill it. It will put the spike into the eye or in the neck. I won’t harm people they love to eat trees. When they ate the flowers seed, he will dung it out and the flower it had eaten will grow again. 20 January 2008
Book Summary: Snow Blind
The pilot drove the six seater plane with his sister Meg a sixteen years old girl and a camera man. Her father needed to make a program about the Artic, they had went (gone) to Artics Bolam Island.
When they had landed, they saw a very old man and a boy that is bigger than Meg, the boys name was Joe. The Meg and her father and the camera man went to far away from Bolam Island. And when they walked in the middle of the Artic, they saw footprints like elephants and heard sounds like this HWAOOO! and then HWAOOO! HWAOOOOO! then, HWAAAOOOOOO!
Then when they went back home and slept all day long but the middle of Meg’s dream, there are northen(northern) lights every where. Then Meg was awake, Meg was surprised then the next day came, Meg’s father and the camera man was out. Meg and Joe wanted to go up the hill to have fun. When they got out, they ate, drink and rest there then there was a guardian he let them to the proffessers (professor's) office.
Then the professor showed one of his experiments. It experiments means using this machine the dead animals will be alive. At last, they knew that it is because the professor make the machine to make the mammoths be alive. 18 January 2008
When they had landed, they saw a very old man and a boy that is bigger than Meg, the boys name was Joe. The Meg and her father and the camera man went to far away from Bolam Island. And when they walked in the middle of the Artic, they saw footprints like elephants and heard sounds like this HWAOOO! and then HWAOOO! HWAOOOOO! then, HWAAAOOOOOO!
Then when they went back home and slept all day long but the middle of Meg’s dream, there are northen(northern) lights every where. Then Meg was awake, Meg was surprised then the next day came, Meg’s father and the camera man was out. Meg and Joe wanted to go up the hill to have fun. When they got out, they ate, drink and rest there then there was a guardian he let them to the proffessers (professor's) office.
Then the professor showed one of his experiments. It experiments means using this machine the dead animals will be alive. At last, they knew that it is because the professor make the machine to make the mammoths be alive. 18 January 2008
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