"Mrs Mannering has something in her mind that she wants to tell us," said Philip. "Let's go ask her!" said Jack. "Yeah!" said Lucy-Ann and Dinah together.
Mrs Mannering told them they were going on a ship. "Oh, yeah! Ship of adventure!" shouted Jack excitedly.
The next day Mrs Mannering, Jack, Philip, Dinah, Lucy-Ann and Kiki travelled on a ship.
They went on[to] a [an] island. Philip saw someone throwing stones at something. "If it's alive I'll hit them with my fist!" thought Philip. He went closer and closer to the thing that the children are throwing at. He saw it and said, "It's a baby monkey!"
Lucy-Ann met a friend called Lucian, and said, "Today is my brother Philip's birthday. I'll buy a ship in a bottle in it since we are in a ship adventure."
Philip was washing the monkey's fur and called him Mickey. While he was washing Mickey Lucy-Ann Jumped out from nowhere and shouted "Happy birthday Philip!"
That night Mickey broke the present and he groaned. He groaned. He told the other children and they groaned too. That day they met a new friend called Mr Eppy.
Jack accidently[accidentally] found a map in the ship that Mickey broke. They cut it into four pieces and showed one to Mr Eppy. Mr Eppy got [held onto] it a long time and gave it back by a big gull.
"Mr Eppy should have a good printout for himself, " Jack groaned angrily. But that day Mrs Mannering had to take care [of] someone so he took Bill to go with them. The children were so glad to meet Bill.
The children showed the whole map to Bill. And he asked one of the map detectives on the island to make it [into] English.
Bill let them into his boat and led them to the treasure island called Thamis.
Inside the map they saw a picture like this {reverse UU} and later on they knew it was a shape of a rock. They went inside and it was blocked.
They they saw a word that mean maze called labyrinth. They went inside and Kiki didn't like it much. So he standed [stood] outside with Jack and saw Mr Eppy.
The three children and Bill looked at the treasure... 1 December 2008
23 December 2008
Circus of Adventure
The children were tired out when they finished they're [their] holiday with Bill. Bill said after the holiday he would bring a prince!
They waited and waited, Jack, Lucy Ann, Dinah, Philip and Mrs Mannering saw a prince coming. He had curly hair, funny trousers, wearing a[an] awful hat and had a good manner.
Kiki teased him and he did not like it. So he stayed away from Kiki. He had a quite bad English and Dinah, Jack and Philip hated him.
Kiki teased him a lot and the prince lost his manners and ordered and comanded [commanded] the children to do things for him.
He had bad habits in the restaurant so he and Lucy Ann, Jack, Philip and Dinah were kicked out of the restaurant.
One time he said: "I want ice cream and pie!" "He could not eat them together," said Mrs Mannering. "That's what I ordered, you disgusting beast," the prince said.
The next day someone captured Philip, Lucy Ann, Dinah and the prince. But Jack heard Lucy Ann's cries. So he hurried them and went to a peculiar land.
There he met a friend called Pedro. He is a circus boy who is friendly, kind and never go mad. So Jack liked him.
One night when everyone else was asleep Jack creeped [crept] out of the room and searched for the castle that Philip, Dinah and Lucy Ann were captured prisoners.
At last he found it and found a ladder to the castle. He ran up and when he is about to put the ladder down the ladder broke.
He ran up and down the castle he felt quite sure he knows the way. When he thinked [thought] of that he felt confident. So he marched down the castle making loud thumps to let the solders [soldiers] think he is a soldier.
At last he found a way back to the circus where he slept. He woke up in the middle of crowd. Kiki was squawking, talking and screaming with the crowd, saying, "Yeah! Wow! Cool! Coofantasticelo[?]"
He went to ask Pedro about his friends. "I don't know," Pedro anered [answered]. "But I'll help you save them with my two friends... Tony... and... Bingo."
"Is Bingo a dog?" asked Jack. "No, he is a man that knows how to walk on wire ropes very well." "And when they two are together they can think of many ideas," said Pedro with a grin.
The four went into castle and saved Philip, Lucy Ann, Dinah and Philip's mouse Squeaky.
We need to dress the prince up like a girl, suggested Pedro's mom. Everyone agreed except of course the prince.
And the prince was dressed like a girl. After a few days some soldiers went to find the prince in the circus. The soldiers of course cannot find the prince because he is dressed like a girl.
At last the prince let them into a feast and Kiki did not tease the prince [any more]. 12 November 2008
They waited and waited, Jack, Lucy Ann, Dinah, Philip and Mrs Mannering saw a prince coming. He had curly hair, funny trousers, wearing a[an] awful hat and had a good manner.
Kiki teased him and he did not like it. So he stayed away from Kiki. He had a quite bad English and Dinah, Jack and Philip hated him.
Kiki teased him a lot and the prince lost his manners and ordered and comanded [commanded] the children to do things for him.
He had bad habits in the restaurant so he and Lucy Ann, Jack, Philip and Dinah were kicked out of the restaurant.
One time he said: "I want ice cream and pie!" "He could not eat them together," said Mrs Mannering. "That's what I ordered, you disgusting beast," the prince said.
The next day someone captured Philip, Lucy Ann, Dinah and the prince. But Jack heard Lucy Ann's cries. So he hurried them and went to a peculiar land.
There he met a friend called Pedro. He is a circus boy who is friendly, kind and never go mad. So Jack liked him.
One night when everyone else was asleep Jack creeped [crept] out of the room and searched for the castle that Philip, Dinah and Lucy Ann were captured prisoners.
At last he found it and found a ladder to the castle. He ran up and when he is about to put the ladder down the ladder broke.
He ran up and down the castle he felt quite sure he knows the way. When he thinked [thought] of that he felt confident. So he marched down the castle making loud thumps to let the solders [soldiers] think he is a soldier.
At last he found a way back to the circus where he slept. He woke up in the middle of crowd. Kiki was squawking, talking and screaming with the crowd, saying, "Yeah! Wow! Cool! Coofantasticelo[?]"
He went to ask Pedro about his friends. "I don't know," Pedro anered [answered]. "But I'll help you save them with my two friends... Tony... and... Bingo."
"Is Bingo a dog?" asked Jack. "No, he is a man that knows how to walk on wire ropes very well." "And when they two are together they can think of many ideas," said Pedro with a grin.
The four went into castle and saved Philip, Lucy Ann, Dinah and Philip's mouse Squeaky.
We need to dress the prince up like a girl, suggested Pedro's mom. Everyone agreed except of course the prince.
And the prince was dressed like a girl. After a few days some soldiers went to find the prince in the circus. The soldiers of course cannot find the prince because he is dressed like a girl.
At last the prince let them into a feast and Kiki did not tease the prince [any more]. 12 November 2008
Sea of Adventure
Mrs Mannering was upset ‘They should come at 1 hour earlier!’ cried Mrs Mannering to the police. ‘It’s your fault!’ said the police ‘You did not bring them with you.’ ‘My fault?’ said Mrs Mannering angrily. And bleated out angry words.
Once they went onto Puffin Island, they are tripped and troped on many puffins. Philip got two more puffins as his pet of. When he got to get the name of the puffins, Kiki bleated out two words, huffin…puffine! ‘Those tow words can be a name for my new pets!’ said Philip cheerfully.
As for the bad news they need to sleep on the Island forever! ‘We could sleep in that hole?’ shouted Jack. “Never!’ said Lucy-Ann disgustingly. Philips’ puffin kept saying arr…arr for the whole day. ‘Hush!’ everybody said.
At last Bill found them and took them to a safe place and they were happy. 29 October 2008
Once they went onto Puffin Island, they are tripped and troped on many puffins. Philip got two more puffins as his pet of. When he got to get the name of the puffins, Kiki bleated out two words, huffin…puffine! ‘Those tow words can be a name for my new pets!’ said Philip cheerfully.
As for the bad news they need to sleep on the Island forever! ‘We could sleep in that hole?’ shouted Jack. “Never!’ said Lucy-Ann disgustingly. Philips’ puffin kept saying arr…arr for the whole day. ‘Hush!’ everybody said.
At last Bill found them and took them to a safe place and they were happy. 29 October 2008
The Time Machine
A long time ago, a scientist (with a huge lump of black hair on the head; and a long, black beard; with a rectangled shape eye glasses) made a perfectly peculiar thing. His name is called [deleted] Timothy Mothcheat Duncard, and his short form is Tim.
He thought it was a roller coaster (with no railway of course). So he sat on the seat and pressed a red butten [button]. Then type some numbers (and those numbers are 1900). Tim didn't knew [know] it was the age of the dinosaurs. So he set [sat] excitedly on the seat patiently. But then something extraordinary happened.
Something went boom! And he shouted to himself (because he can't hear anything). "I must be dizzy!" Then he stopped because the so-called roller coaster stopped (it is NOT a roller roaster).
When he got out a hooting sound came "Ah, Ha!" said Tim. "I went to the Greek [Greece]!" And he danced excitedly and slipped down a crack (it's a footprint not a crack).
"Help me!" he cried. "Somebody save me!" Then he knew something unusual. He fell in the CRACK of a giant reptile. "I must have become small," Tim said.
Then he heard a roar (of a thing that he don't [doesn't] know)! "It should be a saber tooth attacking the Greek people."
Then he heard a rumbling of footsteps. "That must be the Greek people running away from the saber tooth!" Tim shouted out excitedly.
Then a strange face appeared and got Tim out of the hole and Tim cried like a baby without a mother. And he cried, "I want my... mom..."
The big lizard carried Tim away and Tim looked at the thing. "It's an Iguanadon!" He is now filled with wonders. But it was all a dream! October 2008
He thought it was a roller coaster (with no railway of course). So he sat on the seat and pressed a red butten [button]. Then type some numbers (and those numbers are 1900). Tim didn't knew [know] it was the age of the dinosaurs. So he set [sat] excitedly on the seat patiently. But then something extraordinary happened.
Something went boom! And he shouted to himself (because he can't hear anything). "I must be dizzy!" Then he stopped because the so-called roller coaster stopped (it is NOT a roller roaster).
When he got out a hooting sound came "Ah, Ha!" said Tim. "I went to the Greek [Greece]!" And he danced excitedly and slipped down a crack (it's a footprint not a crack).
"Help me!" he cried. "Somebody save me!" Then he knew something unusual. He fell in the CRACK of a giant reptile. "I must have become small," Tim said.
Then he heard a roar (of a thing that he don't [doesn't] know)! "It should be a saber tooth attacking the Greek people."
Then he heard a rumbling of footsteps. "That must be the Greek people running away from the saber tooth!" Tim shouted out excitedly.
Then a strange face appeared and got Tim out of the hole and Tim cried like a baby without a mother. And he cried, "I want my... mom..."
The big lizard carried Tim away and Tim looked at the thing. "It's an Iguanadon!" He is now filled with wonders. But it was all a dream! October 2008
Ben Ten
Ben was walking alone in the forest. Suddenlly [Suddenly] a small asteroid as big as Ben's hands followed Ben. Ben ran away in panic. But the bang made Ben fly away.
When the bang was over Ben realized that the rock had non-sharp spines, and suddenly it opened. And out came a green, white and black unfamiliar watch. That landed on Ben's right hand wrist. That time he's called Ben Ten.
He pressed a butten [button] and became Heatblast. "Ah, I'm on fire I'm on fire!" Heatblast cried. He ran round the forest doing nothing but screaming. Then Grandpa Maz and Gwen was [were] running in the forest fire and finding Heatblast sitting on a log.
"We need to destroy this monster," Max said. "It seems to me it's an alien," Gwen said intrestedly [interestedly]. "No! I'm a good guy!" Heatblast cried. "Ben?" said Gwen surprisingly.
Just then something on Heatblast had a red light going. Beep the tone was getting lower and soon Heatblast became Ben.
Then two small robots attacked Ben. "I need a go to the hard way!" Ben became Upgrade. "Cool! What can this alien do?" said Upgrade. Then he controlled one of the robots. When the battle was finished, Ben used XLR-8 to bully the bullies, Fourarms for ice-cream, Stinkfly for aeroplanes, ripjaws for saving, upcraft for destroy and Ghost freak for Peaking.
Then he slept. But before he slept he said "We will play this game tomorrow." Filgex was watching him with his evil red eyes. 4 October 2008
When the bang was over Ben realized that the rock had non-sharp spines, and suddenly it opened. And out came a green, white and black unfamiliar watch. That landed on Ben's right hand wrist. That time he's called Ben Ten.
He pressed a butten [button] and became Heatblast. "Ah, I'm on fire I'm on fire!" Heatblast cried. He ran round the forest doing nothing but screaming. Then Grandpa Maz and Gwen was [were] running in the forest fire and finding Heatblast sitting on a log.
"We need to destroy this monster," Max said. "It seems to me it's an alien," Gwen said intrestedly [interestedly]. "No! I'm a good guy!" Heatblast cried. "Ben?" said Gwen surprisingly.
Just then something on Heatblast had a red light going. Beep the tone was getting lower and soon Heatblast became Ben.
Then two small robots attacked Ben. "I need a go to the hard way!" Ben became Upgrade. "Cool! What can this alien do?" said Upgrade. Then he controlled one of the robots. When the battle was finished, Ben used XLR-8 to bully the bullies, Fourarms for ice-cream, Stinkfly for aeroplanes, ripjaws for saving, upcraft for destroy and Ghost freak for Peaking.
Then he slept. But before he slept he said "We will play this game tomorrow." Filgex was watching him with his evil red eyes. 4 October 2008
20 December 2008
The Island of Adventure
Characters: Philip and Dinah decided to be freinds [friends] with Jack and Lucy Ann. Joe is a very unpleasant man. Mrs Mannering is Philip and Dinah's aunt. Bob is a pleasant man. Kiki is a bird that is owned by Jack.
Philip, Dinah, Jack and Lucy Ann decided to go on a hiking adventure. They went to the beach and visited Bob. Bob drove to the market to buy torches, headlights and a camera film for Jack, the others had headlights and torches for discovering some caves near the shore.
They went back to their half ruined, half new house. And went down the beach, Dinah and Lucy Ann were too scared to go inside. Jack suddenly disappeared and Philip disappeared too later. They found that there's a secret trapdoor in the cave.
The boys decided to tell Bob. Bob didn't tell much about himself, he just sat down and listened.
The next day the boys told Dinah and Lucy Ann what they saw in the caves. "This looks like some kinda mystery!" said Dinah. "Oh, I love mysterys!" cried Lucy Ann.
The next day Bob let them go to the Isleof Gloom by themselves. Jack was lost and Philip, Dinah and Lucy Ann was upset. They went to tell bill that they had lost Jack in the Isle of Gloom.
They went to Isle of Gloom again to save Jack but two unpleasant men caught them. They set them into the most unpleasant cage.
They got a map and in a dark corner lay Jack. The men took them to the wrong cage.
They found in the map that there's a secret trapdoor out of this cage. They went out of the trapdoor and went back to Craggy-Tops.
At last the men are caught and Joe who helped the men is fired from Philip and Dinah's home.
15 October 2008
Philip, Dinah, Jack and Lucy Ann decided to go on a hiking adventure. They went to the beach and visited Bob. Bob drove to the market to buy torches, headlights and a camera film for Jack, the others had headlights and torches for discovering some caves near the shore.
They went back to their half ruined, half new house. And went down the beach, Dinah and Lucy Ann were too scared to go inside. Jack suddenly disappeared and Philip disappeared too later. They found that there's a secret trapdoor in the cave.
The boys decided to tell Bob. Bob didn't tell much about himself, he just sat down and listened.
The next day the boys told Dinah and Lucy Ann what they saw in the caves. "This looks like some kinda mystery!" said Dinah. "Oh, I love mysterys!" cried Lucy Ann.
The next day Bob let them go to the Isleof Gloom by themselves. Jack was lost and Philip, Dinah and Lucy Ann was upset. They went to tell bill that they had lost Jack in the Isle of Gloom.
They went to Isle of Gloom again to save Jack but two unpleasant men caught them. They set them into the most unpleasant cage.
They got a map and in a dark corner lay Jack. The men took them to the wrong cage.
They found in the map that there's a secret trapdoor out of this cage. They went out of the trapdoor and went back to Craggy-Tops.
At last the men are caught and Joe who helped the men is fired from Philip and Dinah's home.
15 October 2008
Harriet's Hare
Harriet heard a noise coming from the wheat feild [field]. It sound like a UFO. When Harriet got out of bed and looked carefully at the UFO print. She saw a hare. Don't go, I won't hurt you, she said in her mind. Suddenly the hare turned and hopped towards her. In her amaze the hare said "Good morning earth girl I'm from Pars and I'm 36 years old.
Harriet warned the hare her father is coming. Suddenly Bran the sheep dog barked, meaning "Come on silly old cow walk to the yard." I become a sparrow, said Wiz the hare. Then he became a bluebird and fly [flew] away.
The next day Harriet went to pick carrots. Then she saw Wiz. Wiz stared at her. "I dont' mind you can eat it; I need to say to you Wiz my dad is coming." Slowly POP!!! A snail was on the carrot top. "Let's have a race when father's gone!" said Harriet quietly. "Ready." Like the wind and Harriet was racing like a horse. Suddenly POP!! Wiz became a hadhog and Harriet won.
Suddenly Wiz gone [went] away running fighting with a she rabbit. "Bye Wiz." said Harriet. Slowly she went to her car.
When Harriet was driving her car on the main street, a pretty old woman asked "I wonder if you could selll me a dozen eggs." "Of course!" said Harriet. "Oh, thank you!" said the old lady. When Harriet went back something happened. The old lady came she said "I'm Lambert, Jessika Lambert." Then Harriet's father came he said "I'm John Butler."
When Harriet went to the farm a cow that looks unfamiliar stared at her. "That's Wiz" thought Harriet.
At last Jessika decided to be Harriet's step mother. That night she saw a hare on the moon, she had to lose her hare. August 2008
Harriet warned the hare her father is coming. Suddenly Bran the sheep dog barked, meaning "Come on silly old cow walk to the yard." I become a sparrow, said Wiz the hare. Then he became a bluebird and fly [flew] away.
The next day Harriet went to pick carrots. Then she saw Wiz. Wiz stared at her. "I dont' mind you can eat it; I need to say to you Wiz my dad is coming." Slowly POP!!! A snail was on the carrot top. "Let's have a race when father's gone!" said Harriet quietly. "Ready." Like the wind and Harriet was racing like a horse. Suddenly POP!! Wiz became a hadhog and Harriet won.
Suddenly Wiz gone [went] away running fighting with a she rabbit. "Bye Wiz." said Harriet. Slowly she went to her car.
When Harriet was driving her car on the main street, a pretty old woman asked "I wonder if you could selll me a dozen eggs." "Of course!" said Harriet. "Oh, thank you!" said the old lady. When Harriet went back something happened. The old lady came she said "I'm Lambert, Jessika Lambert." Then Harriet's father came he said "I'm John Butler."
When Harriet went to the farm a cow that looks unfamiliar stared at her. "That's Wiz" thought Harriet.
At last Jessika decided to be Harriet's step mother. That night she saw a hare on the moon, she had to lose her hare. August 2008
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