I was minding my own business in my laboratory making my [a] special medicine. First I thought it was special. Then when I drank it, it was strange. It was sour, I put sweet in it. But it was still sour. Then I was daydreaming - I was daydreaming that I'm a veliceraptor. When I finished [it] I became a veliceraptor. I had yellow stripes, razor sharp claws and teeth and a green slender body. I became the same colour and creature that I had daydreamed today. It was so strange.
I decided not to be a scientist. I decided to be a murderer catcher. 16 April 2008
24 May 2008
A Journey to the Death of the Sea
My friend gave me a letter going to the sea. I was so excited I can't wait! I went to my friend Jonathan's house. He was fixing his submarine. I never saw a submarine like that before. "It looks like a robot crab more than a submarine,' I said. John made a grin. Then he gave me a notebook and a pen.
Later I asked, "What's going on?" John said, "Don't you know we're going to the sea?" But I still have one problem - I'm seasick. This sub has a toilet, living room, bedroom and a kitchen. My friend zoomed in the submarine. I slowly walked in. "Faster you snail!" John said.
When we went inside, the submarine zoomed to the road and in the sea. We went to the coral reef we saw clownfish, parrot fish, sea slugs, moray eels, octopus, sharks, catfish, seahorses and rays. I wrote it in my notebook.
As we went deeper, I knew something strange. The submarine didn't swim it crawled. Then we saw lots of salmon. The submarine's claws caught lots of them. I cooked some fish. I ate it. They were yummy.
As we went deeper we saw whales, squids and salmon as we went to the death [depth] I was excited. I saw squids, viper fish, angler fish, hatchet fish, vampire fish, starfish and gulper eels. I was scared. We went back home and told are [our] parents about the amazing trip. 14 April 2008
Later I asked, "What's going on?" John said, "Don't you know we're going to the sea?" But I still have one problem - I'm seasick. This sub has a toilet, living room, bedroom and a kitchen. My friend zoomed in the submarine. I slowly walked in. "Faster you snail!" John said.
When we went inside, the submarine zoomed to the road and in the sea. We went to the coral reef we saw clownfish, parrot fish, sea slugs, moray eels, octopus, sharks, catfish, seahorses and rays. I wrote it in my notebook.
As we went deeper, I knew something strange. The submarine didn't swim it crawled. Then we saw lots of salmon. The submarine's claws caught lots of them. I cooked some fish. I ate it. They were yummy.
As we went deeper we saw whales, squids and salmon as we went to the death [depth] I was excited. I saw squids, viper fish, angler fish, hatchet fish, vampire fish, starfish and gulper eels. I was scared. We went back home and told are [our] parents about the amazing trip. 14 April 2008
The Time Machine
I'm a young scientist. I made a time machine and used it to go to the past, millions [of] years ago when the first animals roamed the world. I don't even know where the first creatures live. As I used my time machine to find out, I felt excited. As fast as I could I scrambled out to the time machine. I pressed the keys and 1,000,000 my globe was turning so fast that I couldn't count how many rounds it had turned.
After a minute the globe had stopped turning. All the places, Asia, Europe, Africa and all the continents were stick [stuck] together. I felt strange that they were stuck. I looked around, I wasn't in my laboratory. I was in the sea. I saw many strange things. I just knew two strange animals: one is pleisiosaurus and the other is lixosaurus. I was scared to death. I pressed the keys again and 1,000,000. Now I found some early fishes and amphibians. They were so strange. 6 April 2008
After a minute the globe had stopped turning. All the places, Asia, Europe, Africa and all the continents were stick [stuck] together. I felt strange that they were stuck. I looked around, I wasn't in my laboratory. I was in the sea. I saw many strange things. I just knew two strange animals: one is pleisiosaurus and the other is lixosaurus. I was scared to death. I pressed the keys again and 1,000,000. Now I found some early fishes and amphibians. They were so strange. 6 April 2008
The Time of the Roaming Robots with Ben Ten
I was with my friend Ben Tenison playing the computer. As we played, we didn't know Kylie was playing the printer. Not carefully Kylie made us to the inside of the computer game.
The game was the roaming robot of living creatures. First, we saw an army of gigantic germs, some oval shape some circle shape. They're spitting diseases to Ben Ten and me. Ben Ten used his watch to become fire ball. He shot several fire balls. Next he became four arms.
After punching 40 or 50 of those germs, it was the second test in the game. The test took place in the sea. We saw billions of sea creatures. We saw some Anomalocarises, Picajas, Hallucigenias, Wiwaxias and SacaBambaspises. Ben Ten became light bulb fish. He used his ferious sharp teeth sunken into many sea creatures.
The third test was with the plant eating dinosaurs. There were brachiosaurus, stegosaurus, sauposaurus, evelophalus, triceratop. They used their armour to attack us. Ben Ten used his Lion Mon to bite those dinosaurs after the test.
The fourth test was with meat-eating dinosaurs. I saw Tyranosaurus, Tarbosaurus, Spinosaurus, Linosaurus and Tinosaurus. Ben Ten became X-R5. He ran and the dust made the dinosaurs cough. Ben Ten knew these dinosaurs were dusk sick. As they were coughing, Ben Ten became grey matter and went inside the dinosaur's mouth. Then he pulled all the teeth of the dinosaurs. After that we got out of the computer and he thought the tests were easy. 29 March 2008
The game was the roaming robot of living creatures. First, we saw an army of gigantic germs, some oval shape some circle shape. They're spitting diseases to Ben Ten and me. Ben Ten used his watch to become fire ball. He shot several fire balls. Next he became four arms.
After punching 40 or 50 of those germs, it was the second test in the game. The test took place in the sea. We saw billions of sea creatures. We saw some Anomalocarises, Picajas, Hallucigenias, Wiwaxias and SacaBambaspises. Ben Ten became light bulb fish. He used his ferious sharp teeth sunken into many sea creatures.
The third test was with the plant eating dinosaurs. There were brachiosaurus, stegosaurus, sauposaurus, evelophalus, triceratop. They used their armour to attack us. Ben Ten used his Lion Mon to bite those dinosaurs after the test.
The fourth test was with meat-eating dinosaurs. I saw Tyranosaurus, Tarbosaurus, Spinosaurus, Linosaurus and Tinosaurus. Ben Ten became X-R5. He ran and the dust made the dinosaurs cough. Ben Ten knew these dinosaurs were dusk sick. As they were coughing, Ben Ten became grey matter and went inside the dinosaur's mouth. Then he pulled all the teeth of the dinosaurs. After that we got out of the computer and he thought the tests were easy. 29 March 2008
Book Review: Myth or Mystery
Story 1: Once upon a time a family near Mississippi River caught many fish. One spring the son went fishing. Just then a sea monster with a snake like neck popped out of the water [and] caught their son and swam down the sea [river]. The father cut down trees and put it in the river and put some fire. The river was boiling. The monster popped out of the water and the father killed it.
Story 2: It's boring
Story 3: I was reading a lot of books about flying creatures. One day my friends said they had saw [seen] the flying monster want to attack me. This [was] the last thing I knew. 13 March 2008
Story 2: It's boring
Story 3: I was reading a lot of books about flying creatures. One day my friends said they had saw [seen] the flying monster want to attack me. This [was] the last thing I knew. 13 March 2008
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)
