23 December 2008

Ben Ten

Ben was walking alone in the forest. Suddenlly [Suddenly] a small asteroid as big as Ben's hands followed Ben. Ben ran away in panic. But the bang made Ben fly away.

When the bang was over Ben realized that the rock had non-sharp spines, and suddenly it opened. And out came a green, white and black unfamiliar watch. That landed on Ben's right hand wrist. That time he's called Ben Ten.

He pressed a butten [button] and became Heatblast. "Ah, I'm on fire I'm on fire!" Heatblast cried. He ran round the forest doing nothing but screaming. Then Grandpa Maz and Gwen was [were] running in the forest fire and finding Heatblast sitting on a log.

"We need to destroy this monster," Max said. "It seems to me it's an alien," Gwen said intrestedly [interestedly]. "No! I'm a good guy!" Heatblast cried. "Ben?" said Gwen surprisingly.

Just then something on Heatblast had a red light going. Beep the tone was getting lower and soon Heatblast became Ben.

Then two small robots attacked Ben. "I need a go to the hard way!" Ben became Upgrade. "Cool! What can this alien do?" said Upgrade. Then he controlled one of the robots. When the battle was finished, Ben used XLR-8 to bully the bullies, Fourarms for ice-cream, Stinkfly for aeroplanes, ripjaws for saving, upcraft for destroy and Ghost freak for Peaking.

Then he slept. But before he slept he said "We will play this game tomorrow." Filgex was watching him with his evil red eyes. 4 October 2008

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