23 December 2008

The Time Machine

A long time ago, a scientist (with a huge lump of black hair on the head; and a long, black beard; with a rectangled shape eye glasses) made a perfectly peculiar thing. His name is called [deleted] Timothy Mothcheat Duncard, and his short form is Tim.

He thought it was a roller coaster (with no railway of course). So he sat on the seat and pressed a red butten [button]. Then type some numbers (and those numbers are 1900). Tim didn't knew [know] it was the age of the dinosaurs. So he set [sat] excitedly on the seat patiently. But then something extraordinary happened.

Something went boom! And he shouted to himself (because he can't hear anything). "I must be dizzy!" Then he stopped because the so-called roller coaster stopped (it is NOT a roller roaster).

When he got out a hooting sound came "Ah, Ha!" said Tim. "I went to the Greek [Greece]!" And he danced excitedly and slipped down a crack (it's a footprint not a crack).

"Help me!" he cried. "Somebody save me!" Then he knew something unusual. He fell in the CRACK of a giant reptile. "I must have become small," Tim said.

Then he heard a roar (of a thing that he don't [doesn't] know)! "It should be a saber tooth attacking the Greek people."

Then he heard a rumbling of footsteps. "That must be the Greek people running away from the saber tooth!" Tim shouted out excitedly.

Then a strange face appeared and got Tim out of the hole and Tim cried like a baby without a mother. And he cried, "I want my... mom..."

The big lizard carried Tim away and Tim looked at the thing. "It's an Iguanadon!" He is now filled with wonders. But it was all a dream! October 2008

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