Ship of Adventure

"Mrs Mannering has something in her mind that she wants to tell us," said Philip. "Let's go ask her!" said Jack. "Yeah!" said Lucy-Ann and Dinah together.

Mrs Mannering told them they were going on a ship. "Oh, yeah! Ship of adventure!" shouted Jack excitedly.

The next day Mrs Mannering, Jack, Philip, Dinah, Lucy-Ann and Kiki travelled on a ship.

They went on[to] a [an] island. Philip saw someone throwing stones at something. "If it's alive I'll hit them with my fist!" thought Philip. He went closer and closer to the thing that the children are throwing at. He saw it and said, "It's a baby monkey!"

Lucy-Ann met a friend called Lucian, and said, "Today is my brother Philip's birthday. I'll buy a ship in a bottle in it since we are in a ship adventure."

Philip was washing the monkey's fur and called him Mickey. While he was washing Mickey Lucy-Ann Jumped out from nowhere and shouted "Happy birthday Philip!"

That night Mickey broke the present and he groaned. He groaned. He told the other children and they groaned too. That day they met a new friend called Mr Eppy.

Jack accidently[accidentally] found a map in the ship that Mickey broke. They cut it into four pieces and showed one to Mr Eppy. Mr Eppy got [held onto] it a long time and gave it back by a big gull.

"Mr Eppy should have a good printout for himself, " Jack groaned angrily. But that day Mrs Mannering had to take care [of] someone so he took Bill to go with them. The children were so glad to meet Bill.

The children showed the whole map to Bill. And he asked one of the map detectives on the island to make it [into] English.

Bill let them into his boat and led them to the treasure island called Thamis.

Inside the map they saw a picture like this {reverse UU} and later on they knew it was a shape of a rock. They went inside and it was blocked.

They they saw a word that mean maze called labyrinth. They went inside and Kiki didn't like it much. So he standed [stood] outside with Jack and saw Mr Eppy.

The three children and Bill looked at the treasure... 1 December 2008