Circus of Adventure

The children were tired out when they finished they're [their] holiday with Bill. Bill said after the holiday he would bring a prince!

They waited and waited, Jack, Lucy Ann, Dinah, Philip and Mrs Mannering saw a prince coming. He had curly hair, funny trousers, wearing a[an] awful hat and had a good manner.

Kiki teased him and he did not like it. So he stayed away from Kiki. He had a quite bad English and Dinah, Jack and Philip hated him.

Kiki teased him a lot and the prince lost his manners and ordered and comanded [commanded] the children to do things for him.

He had bad habits in the restaurant so he and Lucy Ann, Jack, Philip and Dinah were kicked out of the restaurant.

One time he said: "I want ice cream and pie!" "He could not eat them together," said Mrs Mannering. "That's what I ordered, you disgusting beast," the prince said.

The next day someone captured Philip, Lucy Ann, Dinah and the prince. But Jack heard Lucy Ann's cries. So he hurried them and went to a peculiar land.

There he met a friend called Pedro. He is a circus boy who is friendly, kind and never go mad. So Jack liked him.

One night when everyone else was asleep Jack creeped [crept] out of the room and searched for the castle that Philip, Dinah and Lucy Ann were captured prisoners.

At last he found it and found a ladder to the castle. He ran up and when he is about to put the ladder down the ladder broke.

He ran up and down the castle he felt quite sure he knows the way. When he thinked [thought] of that he felt confident. So he marched down the castle making loud thumps to let the solders [soldiers] think he is a soldier.

At last he found a way back to the circus where he slept. He woke up in the middle of crowd. Kiki was squawking, talking and screaming with the crowd, saying, "Yeah! Wow! Cool! Coofantasticelo[?]"

He went to ask Pedro about his friends. "I don't know," Pedro anered [answered]. "But I'll help you save them with my two friends... Tony... and... Bingo."

"Is Bingo a dog?" asked Jack. "No, he is a man that knows how to walk on wire ropes very well." "And when they two are together they can think of many ideas," said Pedro with a grin.

The four went into castle and saved Philip, Lucy Ann, Dinah and Philip's mouse Squeaky.

We need to dress the prince up like a girl, suggested Pedro's mom. Everyone agreed except of course the prince.

And the prince was dressed like a girl. After a few days some soldiers went to find the prince in the circus. The soldiers of course cannot find the prince because he is dressed like a girl.

At last the prince let them into a feast and Kiki did not tease the prince [any more]. 12 November 2008