Sam lay on the floor under the bed. He’s been looking for his shoe. He’d been looking for months. Sam is nearly nine. His mother said, “You’re like an end of a broom more than a boy.”
They were going to there [their] Grandpa’s home. The weather was fine to go on a holiday. Grandpa’s dead. When they were on the train, mother gave Sam a comic book. Sam had never went [gone] to Apple Tree Cottage for months. Grandpa always has [had] time to play with Sam but now he is dead.
When they were in Apple Tree Cottage the driver said, “There’s a meadow down the hill.”
Charlie was sitting on his gate when Sam was on his way to Grandpa’s house. Charlie was with two boys called Fletch and Garry. That night Sam knew they knew something about the stolen egg nest and the cottage.
The next morning Sam was glad that the doors had been fixed.
Six weeks later a terrible storm came. It had broke down the stairs. Under the stairs is the egg nest. They opened it and found gold. They didn’t need to sell the house any more! 18 March 2008
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